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Some Deserts deference at stats

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The charts above demonstrate three different of desert stats. As it is clear the Sahara Desert is the biggest desert in comparison with two other desert's chart. This desert also has the highest temperature in average by one degree more than the Great Basin Desert. The next chart illustrates the Taklimakan Desert. That desert has recode of the coldest desert in winter by average of one degree less than the Great Basin Desert, also it owned the most extreme lowest record of temperature. The Greate Basin Desert has top average of high temperature with 30 degrees same as Sahra Desert, but about average annual rainfall, with 51 cm at the north of the desert, has first place. This charts show some environment's stats at all.
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the Sahara
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is the biggest
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. This
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has the highest temperature in
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by one degree more than the Great Basin Desert.

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illustrates the
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in winter by
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of one degree less than the Great Basin
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,
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the most extreme lowest record of temperature.

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of high temperature with 30 degrees same as
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,
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annual rainfall, with 51 cm at the north of the
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environment's stats at all.

IELTS academic Some Deserts deference at stats

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  American English
5 paragraphs
125 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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