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check the park difference in 1920 and now

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The given maps compare Grand Park when it was founded in 1920 and after improvement today. As it is shown in the pictures, some huge changes have happened. There were a stage for musicians, a pond for water, and a glasshouse which have already changed to an amphitheater for concerts, a children’s play area, and water features, respectively. On the other hand, there were three Rose gardens in the park in 1920 which only one of them has remained at the same place as where before. The Rose garden, which was the nearest to the upper entrance, has been substituted by a Café. Also, a bigger square rose garden has been constructed in the middle of the park, exactly where there was a fountain in 1920. The number of seats has decreased, as well. Although these seats were spread around the park before, they are already located around the biggest Rose garden in the middle of the park. The last but not least, although, the entrances have faced any changes since 1920, another entrance has been added under the ground as a car park.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps compare Grand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 when it was founded
 in 1920 and after improvement This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

As it is shown
 in the pictures, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 huge This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 have happened. There were a stage for musicians, a pond for water, and a glasshouse which have already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to an amphitheater for concerts, a children’s play area, and water features, respectively
.

On the other hand
, there were three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
Rose
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gardens
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in 1920 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one of them has remained at the same place as where This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
Rose
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garden
, which was the nearest to the upper entrance, has been substituted
 by a Café. Also
, a bigger square You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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garden
 has been constructed
 in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, exactly where there was a fountain in 1920. The number of seats has decreased, as well
. Although these seats were spread
 around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
, they are already located around the biggest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
Rose
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garden
 in the middle of the park.

The last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, although, the entrances have faced any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 since 1920, another entrance has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 under the ground as a car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. 