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The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).

The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Y8QB

The diagram presents the industry of different kinds of tea. it can be seen that all types begin and culminating by the same processes, but they differ in the middle stages. First of all, all the five tea leaves are grown in the same conditions likewise plucking. These two stages are followed by wilting, and all of them going to be drying in the oven at the end. However, the teas industry are employed by various methods. With regards to white tea, it is immediately going to be ready without more chemical processes, while others are involving in vital steps. Green tea needs to be steaming and rolling before taken to the oven. Furthermore, Oolong tea and large leaf black tea have to be rolled. Moreover, they are required to be in fermentation (slight fermentation for the former and completely for the latter). The only type of the five which need crushing is the small leaf black tea before moving to the full fermentation stage.

The diagram presents the industry of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kinds of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that all types This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 and culminating by the same processes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they differ in the middle stages.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, all the five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
are grown
 in the same conditions likewise
 plucking. These two stages are followed
 by wilting, and all of them going to be drying in the oven at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. However
, the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "teas'" or "tea's"?teas'tea's
teas
 industry are employed
 by various methods.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 white You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
, it is immediately going to be ready without more chemical processes, while others The verb 'involving' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are involving
 in vital steps. Green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 needs to be steaming and rolling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 taken to the oven. Furthermore
, Possible spelling mistake found.Oblong
Oolong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 and large leaf black You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be rolled
. Moreover
, they are required
 to be in fermentation (slight fermentation for the former and completely for the latter). The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 type of the five which need crushing is the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 leaf black You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 moving to the full fermentation stage. 