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Chart illustrating production of alcohol.

Chart illustrating production of alcohol. nxgjP

The process chart illustrating the production of alcoholic beverage with the help of corn. Overall, there are eight stages throughout the whole production is taking place, initiating from getting corn and ending with, where acquired fuel is getting ready for sailing through transportation. In the beginning, the first step goes towards having sufficient corn and then it's storage. However, mining is the third stage at which corn hollowing is being done. After that, the material is being cooked out along with water has been added which runs about 4 hours. The drink had fermentad, turning some of the liquid into ethanol in 2 days. Also a noticable thing here we come across is separation of liquid and solid of product and then purification of alcohol took place near about 5 hours. Coming towards end, 7th stage started from storing the gotten fuel and then taken out from storing area to transportation area. Thus, major change came in which corn produced fuel after its frementing stage.

The process chart illustrating the production of alcoholic beverage with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of corn.

Overall
, there are eight You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 throughout the whole production is taking place, initiating from getting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbanalitybromide
corn
 and ending with, where acquired fuel is getting ready for sailing through transportation.

In the beginning, the first
 step goes towards having sufficient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbanalitybromide
corn
 and then it's storage. However
, mining is the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 at which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbanalitybromide
corn
 hollowing is being done
. After that, the material is being cooked
 out along with water has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 which runs about 4 hours. The drink had Possible spelling mistake found.fermentedferment ad
fermentad
, turning If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 liquid into ethanol in 2 days. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 a Possible spelling mistake found.noticeable
noticable
 thing here we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 across is separation of liquid and solid of product and then purification of alcohol took place near about 5 hours.

Coming towards This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, 7th You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from storing the gotten fuel and then taken out from storing area to transportation area.

Thus
, major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 came in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbanalitybromide
corn
 produced fuel after its Possible spelling mistake found.fermenting
frementing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
. 