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Chart given for people travelling abroad given with various other reasons and an bar graph to illustrate which places were the people traveling to.

Chart given for people travelling abroad given with various other reasons and an bar graph to illustrate which places were the people traveling to. lXxeW
The table illustrates the data for the abroad visits by UK residents during the year 1994-1998. Primarily from the bar graph given below, we can say people have traveled western Europe in a large number being so western Europe has become the prime destination spot for travelers. Coming back to chart 1, during the years from 1994-1998 about 20, 700 people went on a holiday to western Europe recording the highest and 14, 898 being the lowest traveled to North America. during the range of years. Within a similar range of years for about 3, 957 of the people traveled on a business reason to Western Europe being highest visitors and 3, 188 people being the lowest number of visitors traveled to North America other figures indicate people traveling to other areas. In the year 1998, 3, 181 of the people traveled to western Europe in order to visit friends and relatives and the least number of people recorded for the same reason and to North America was recorded in 1995. When compared with both the charts combined, we can hence conclude that the number of people traveling for various reasons to different countries is logarithmically increasing.
The table illustrates the data for the abroad visits by UK residents during the
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1994-1998.
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western Europe
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western Europe
has become the prime destination spot for travelers. Coming back to chart 1, during the years from 1994-1998 about 20, 700
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people
went on a holiday to
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western Europe
recording the highest and 14, 898 being the lowest
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traveled
to North America.
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on a business reason to Western Europe being
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to North America other figures indicate
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1998, 3, 181 of the
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traveled
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in order to visit friends and relatives and the least
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recorded for the same reason and to North America
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in 1995. When compared with both the charts combined, we can
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IELTS academic Chart given for people travelling abroad given with various other reasons and an bar graph to illustrate which places were the people traveling to.

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