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the chart show house prices in 5 cities 1990-2002 compared 1989

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The bar chart gives information about the change in the cost to buy a house in five cities in 5 different countries (NY, Madrid, Tokyo, LD, and Frankfurt) during the period between 1990 and 2002 which is compared with 1989. Overall, After 1989, The spending on the house was decreased in NY, Tokyo, and LD which tended to increase during the next period from 1996 to 2002. The expenditure in Madrid is higher to get a new house. The prices of houses were declined in three cities NY, Tokyo, and LD around 5%, 7%, 7% respectively while the figure for house prices was grown in Frankfurt by nearly 2% and Madrid close to 3% from 1990 to 1995. Turning to the next period between 1996 and 2002, we can see People were bought houses at higher prices than the previous time. At NY and LD, people were paid out for houses more money than in 1989 and the period from 1990 to 1995. The figures for NY and LD were at around 5% and 12% respectively while the price of a house in Tokyo was increased about 2% than the previous time but it was still lower than in 1989. The presentation of prices in Madrid was higher about 4%. By contrast, The house prices in Frankfurt were still higher than in 1989 but it' was fall to around 2% than this period.
The bar chart gives information about the
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change
in the cost to
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a
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house
in five cities in 5
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different
countries (NY, Madrid, Tokyo, LD, and Frankfurt) during the
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between 1990 and 2002 which
is compared
with 1989.
Overall
, After 1989, The spending on the
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house
was decreased
in NY, Tokyo, and LD which tended to increase during the
next
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period
from 1996 to 2002. The expenditure in Madrid is higher to
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get
a new
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house
.

The
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prices
of
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houses
were declined
in three cities NY, Tokyo, and LD around 5%, 7%, 7%
respectively
while the figure for
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house
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prices
was grown
in Frankfurt by
nearly
2% and Madrid close to 3% from 1990 to 1995.

Turning to the
next
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period
between 1996 and 2002, we can
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see
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were
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bought
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houses
at higher
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prices
than the previous time. At NY and LD,
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people
were paid
out for
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houses
more money than in 1989 and the
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from 1990 to 1995. The figures for NY and LD were at around 5% and 12%
respectively
while the
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price
of a
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house
in Tokyo
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about 2% than the previous time
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but
it was
still
lower than in 1989. The presentation of
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prices
in Madrid was higher about 4%. By contrast, The
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in Frankfurt were
still
higher than in 1989
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but
it' was fall to around 2% than this
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