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The chart below illustrates information about different types of addiction. It shows the amount of poisonous substances that are used during the week.

The chart below illustrates information about different types of addiction. It shows the amount of poisonous substances that are used during the week. lRkQW
The bar diagram represents the information about various sort if bad habbits, However the amount of toxic subtance that are consumed during the week. Overall people who have 0-2 dinners with there family are more likely to catch bad habbits, Where as people who have 5-7 dinners with are less porne to get addiction of toxic subtance. having dinner with family plays an vital role in once life and affects there lifestyle, however poeple having 5-7 dinners in week with family very disiciplain and have a few friends who drink regulerly to mention precisely 29% is the number, comparing it with people who have less dinner with family have the highest percentage of 43%, On the other hand addiction of addiction of alchol and marijuana are almost same in people who have less dinners with family, Meanwhile they consume the tobacco regularly with 15%, But people who have more dinner with family are the not addicted to alchol 18% and they have less friends who are consuming marijuana on regular baises. To conclude the bar diagram people who have 5-7 dinners with family are less addicted by bad habbits rather than people who have less dinners with family members 0-2.
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