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changing journey times in a city centre after enhancements were made to the transport network and the costs of using four types of means of transport in the city.

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The table and bar chart gives information about changing journey times in a city centre after enhancements were made to the transport network and the costs of using four types of means of transport in the city. According to the table about how journey times in a city center changed, it can be seen that the average journey was shorter once the transport network was improved, except for car and taxi. It means that the people who use public transport arrive faster to their destination. On the other hand, travellers that used car and taxi became slower than earlier. We shall see that the tram has the highest improvement which is 6 minutes faster than in the past. It declined significantly from 22 minutes to 16 minutes. Similarly to the tram, the bus has become faster than before. Previously, the bus had a journey time of 28 minutes and now it is just 23 minutes. In contrast to tram and bus, the taxi after improvement becomes 3 minutes slower, taxi still the quickest mode of transportation in the city although it increased slightly from 9 minutes to 12 minutes. Besides, the car after improvement becomes 5 minutes slower, it grew enormously from 10 minutes to 15 minutes. The bar chart shows the amount payment of each transport. The cheapest average cost per kilometer was bus with € 0. 40 average cost per kilometre. Tram has had € 0. 50 average cost per kilometre, which was more expensive than bus, but cheaper than car.
The table and bar chart gives information about changing
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journey
times in a city
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centre
after enhancements
were made
to the
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transport
network and the
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costs
of using four types of means of
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transport
in the city.

According to the table about how
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journey
times in a city center
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changed
, it can be
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seen
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average
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journey
was shorter once the
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transport
network was
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improved
,
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except for
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car
and
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taxi
. It means that the
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people
who
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use
public
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transport
arrive faster to their destination.
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,
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travellers
that
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used
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car
and
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taxi
became slower than earlier. We shall
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see
that the tram has the highest improvement which is 6 minutes faster than in the past. It declined
significantly
from 22 minutes to 16 minutes.
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to the tram, the bus has become faster than
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before
. Previously, the bus had a
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time of 28 minutes and
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now
it is
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23 minutes.
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to tram and bus, the
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taxi
after improvement becomes 3 minutes slower,
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taxi
still
the quickest mode of transportation in the city although it increased
slightly
from 9 minutes to 12 minutes.
Besides
, the
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car
after improvement becomes 5 minutes slower, it grew
enormously
from 10 minutes to 15 minutes.

The bar chart
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the amount payment of each
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transport
. The cheapest
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average
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cost
per kilometer was bus with
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€ 0
. 40
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average
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cost
per
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kilometre
. Tram has had
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€ 0
. 50
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cost
per
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, which was more expensive than bus,
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IELTS academic changing journey times in a city centre after enhancements were made to the transport network and the costs of using four types of means of transport in the city.

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