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The graph below shows the population of foxes ob four different Californian islands between 1998 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of foxes ob four different Californian islands between 1998 and 2018. 2K0dx
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the population of foxes ob four different Californian islands between 1998 and 2018.

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