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Changes in period of time

Changes in period of time KngKN

The given content gives us brief description about the renovation done in the Grange Park over a course of time. It tell us about the enhancement done according to the time period required. The map of Grange Park 1920 and present is shown below. There are major difference shown in the pictures, which changes thee out look of the park. In 1990’s there was a fountain in the center of the park, now it is replaced by the garden and a seating area. On top right corner of the park where ponds for water plants and rose garden use to are replaced by Children’s playground and sweet café. It helps parents to take rest enjoy their snakes and can look after their children’s. Now at the bottom left there is a water feature and also entrance for underground car parking but in the past their use to be a Glasshouse and sets to enjoy the park. The entrance of the park are at the same place as that of in the past, but there are extreme changes on to the left side of the park. Their use to be a Rose garden on either side of the park and a Stage for musicians with sites in front, but now the Rose garden is kept only on one side and the Stage is demolished and an Amphitheatre for concerts is constructed. From the above content we can conclude that change is a part of life, like in the past a small stage was enough but as the time progressed we need ample amount of same so that everyone can enjoy their time so Amphitheatre is constructed, which gives opportunities to everyone to perform.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 content gives us brief description about the renovation done in the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 over a course of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. It Did you mean "tells"?tells
tell
 us about the enhancement done according to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 period required. The map of Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 1920 and present is shown
 below.

There are major difference shown in the pictures, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 thee out look of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. The article is probably missing here: "In the 1990’s".In the 1990’s
In 1990’s
 there was a fountain in the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it is replaced
 by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and a seating area. On top right corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 where ponds for water plants and rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to are replaced
 by Children’s playground and sweet café. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 parents to take rest enjoy their snakes and can look after their children’s. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 at the bottom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 there is a water feature and also
 entrance for underground car parking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the past their Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 be a Glasshouse and sets to enjoy the park.

The entrance of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 are at the same place as that of in the past, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there are extreme This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 on to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Their Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 be a Rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 on either side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and a Stage for musicians with sites in front, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the Rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on one side and the Stage is demolished
 and an Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
 for concerts is constructed
.

From the above content we can conclude that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is a part of life, like in the past a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stage was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 progressed we need ample amount of same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that everyone can enjoy their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
is constructed
, which gives opportunities to everyone to perform. 