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changes in a student accommodation

changes in a student accommodation pR5E3

many of things in a student accommodation was changed from 2010 by now. Following the diagrams, the space used for is bigger than the past. Now we get more student bedroom but living room is no more. It was be clear out and used for more student bedroom. by the course of this, it's more student come here so more student bedroom is neccessary. But some disadvantage for those things. No more livingroom, student can not talk and comunicate with each other, no more activities inside and this just a place for sleep and eat. Just one room have en-suite room can be more place for student. Now students do not have to parking out side the house because of the car parking exist beside the house.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMany
many
 of things in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 accommodation was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 from 2010 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Following the diagrams, the space This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for is bigger than the past. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 bedroom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 living room is no more. It was Consider using a past participle here: "been".been
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 out and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 bedroom. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
 the course of this, it's more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 bedroom is Possible spelling mistake found.necessary
neccessary
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disadvantage for those things. No more Possible spelling mistake found.living room
livingroom
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 can not talk and Possible spelling mistake found.communicate
comunicate
 with each other, no more activities inside and this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a place for sleep and eat. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 one room have en-suite room can be more place for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 parking Did you mean "outside"?outside
out side
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the car parking exist beside the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. 