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changes in a student accommodation

changes in a student accommodation pR5E3
many of things in a student accommodation was changed from 2010 by now. Following the diagrams, the space used for is bigger than the past. Now we get more student bedroom but living room is no more. It was be clear out and used for more student bedroom. by the course of this, it's more student come here so more student bedroom is neccessary. But some disadvantage for those things. No more livingroom, student can not talk and comunicate with each other, no more activities inside and this just a place for sleep and eat. Just one room have en-suite room can be more place for student. Now students do not have to parking out side the house because of the car parking exist beside the house.
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of things in a
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student
accommodation was
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changed
from 2010 by
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now
. Following the diagrams, the space
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used
for is bigger than the past.
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Now
we
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get
more
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student
bedroom
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but
living room is no more. It was
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be
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clear
out and
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used
for more
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student
bedroom.
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by
the course of this, it's more
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student
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come
here
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so
more
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student
bedroom is
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neccessary
.
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some
disadvantage for those things. No more
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livingroom
,
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student
can not talk and
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comunicate
with each other, no more activities inside and this
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just
a place for sleep and eat.
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one room have en-suite room can be more place for
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student
.
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students
do not
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have to
parking
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house
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because
of the car parking exist beside the
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IELTS academic changes in a student accommodation

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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