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cement making process and how cement is used in the production of concrete for building

cement making process and how cement is used in the production of concrete for building 73Ng6

The diagrams illustrate the phases and equipment needed to make cement and how cement is used in the production of concrete for construction. Cement production involves five stages. The first process that begins with the mixing of raw materials and ends with the final process is packing the package. Making concrete involves mixing four ingredients in a concrete mixer. For making cement, limestone and clay are crushed together to form a powder, then combined in the mixer before passing into a rotating heater, which has a constant heat applied at one end of the tube. Furthermore, the heated product is grinded with a grinder into cement, which is then poured into the package. For concrete production, it is made up of a half of small stones, a quarter of sand, 15% of cement and 10% of water. All these ingredients are poured into a concrete mixer, which constantly rotates to combine the materials to produce concrete.

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cement
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 in the production of concrete for construction.

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begins
 with the mixing of raw materials and ends with the final process is packing the package. Making concrete involves mixing four ingredients in a concrete mixer.

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, limestone and clay are crushed
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, which is then poured into the package.

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small
 stones, a quarter of sand, 15% of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and 10% of water. All these ingredients are poured
 into a concrete mixer, which constantly
 rotates to combine the materials to produce concrete. 