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The line graph illustrates the percentage of people who used the Internet in three countries from 1999 to 2009.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of people who used the Internet in three countries from 1999 to 2009. It is evident that the propotion of the population who uesd the Internet increased in each countries over the period shown. Overall, a much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the Internet in comparison with Mexicans, and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage. In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in USA was about 20%. The figures for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. In 2005, Internet usage in both USA and Canada rose to around 70% of the population, while the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%. By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was highest in Canada. Almost 100% of Canadians used the internet, compared to about 80% of Americans and only 40% of Mexicans.
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the Internet in three countries from 1999 to 2009.

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propotion
of the population who
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the Internet increased in each countries over the period shown.
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, a much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the Internet
in comparison
with Mexicans, and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage.

In 1999, the proportion of
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people
using the Internet
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in USA
was about 20%. The figures for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5%
respectively
. In 2005, Internet usage in both USA and Canada rose to around 70% of the population, while the figure for Mexico reached
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just
over 25%.

By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was highest in Canada. Almost 100% of Canadians
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used
the internet, compared to about 80% of Americans and
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only
40% of Mexicans.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the percentage of people who used the Internet in three countries from 1999 to 2009.

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4 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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