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Causes of Land Degradation. 

Causes of Land Degradation.  3bMrd
The charts provide information about the causes of worldwide land degradation, and causes of land degradation by region. Overall, over-grazing has caused the highest downfall to the land, and Europe is the only continent that has faced the maximum degradation. According to the four-sectored pie chart, the other causes have caused 7% of land's degradation which is exactly five times lesser as compared to over-grazing. Moreover, over-cultivation has also contributed to land's degradation, and its percentage is four times that of other factors. Furthermore, three in ten proportion of land has been affected by deforestation. The table emphasises the percentage of land degraded by a particular area. In North America, the lowest proportion of total land is degraded which is one in twenty followed by 13% total land degradation in Oceania. This Oceania is a large group of islands in the South Pacific including Australia and New Zealand. Finally, 23% of the land is degraded in Europe. In brief, because of deforestation, 0. 2% of the land is degraded in North America, 9. 8% in Europe, and 1. 7% in Oceania. Over-cultivation has caused a nil proportion of land degradation in Oceania, and 7. 7% in Europe. North America has faced 3. 3% in this category. Over-grazing causes 1. 5% degradation in North America. 5. 5% and 11. 3% degradation occurs in Europe and Oceania respectively.
The charts provide information about the
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causes
of worldwide
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land
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degradation
, and
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causes
of
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land
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degradation
by region.
Overall
, over-grazing has caused the highest downfall to the
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land
, and Europe is the
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only
continent that has faced the maximum degradation.

According to the
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four-sectored
pie chart, the other
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causes
have caused 7% of land's
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degradation
which is exactly five times lesser
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as
compared to over-grazing.
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, over-cultivation has
also
contributed to land's
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degradation
, and its percentage is four times that of other factors.
Furthermore
, three in ten proportion of
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land
has been
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affected
by deforestation.

The table
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emphasises
the percentage of
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land
degraded by a particular area. In
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North
America, the lowest proportion of total
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land
is degraded
which is one in twenty followed by 13% total
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land
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degradation
in Oceania. This Oceania is a large group of islands in the South Pacific including Australia and New Zealand.
Finally
, 23% of the
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land
is degraded
in Europe.

In brief
,
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because
of deforestation, 0. 2% of the
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land
is degraded
in
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North
America, 9. 8% in Europe, and 1. 7% in Oceania. Over-cultivation has caused a nil proportion of
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land
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degradation
in Oceania, and 7. 7% in Europe.
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North
America has faced 3. 3% in this category. Over-grazing
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causes
1. 5%
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degradation
in
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North
America. 5. 5% and 11. 3%
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degradation
occurs in Europe and Oceania
respectively
.
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IELTS academic Causes of Land Degradation. 

Academic
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4 paragraphs
226 words
6.0
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