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The diagram illustrates the number of users of several communication services in the globe in a period lasting a decade from 1998.

The diagram illustrates the number of users of several communication services in the globe in a period lasting a decade from 1998. XqDR8

The diagram illustrates the number of users of several communication services in the globe in a period lasting a decade from 1998. Overall, it is evident that except for mobile broadband consumers, all categories enjoyed an upward trend. Strikingly, the directions of mobile broadband and fixed broadband mirrored each other. While the appearance of fixed broadband occurred in 2002, mobile broadband is created after two years. Afterward, the statistics of these two sorts of users underwent a slight increase to nearly ten percent until 2008. Meanwhile, the landline service customer’s figure remained unchanged at more than 10% in all the period. Interestingly, the gap between internet service and cellular phone service users are expanded. Standing at less than 10% by 1998, the number of two types’ consumers experienced gradual growth until 2004, although that in cellular phone service was more considerable. Subsequent, while the internet service consumers’ statistic continued to rise steadily from 10% to 20% after four years, there was a significant increase of 20% from nearly 30% of the cellular phone service’s in this period.

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service
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Interestingly
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service
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service
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service
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service
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service’s
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