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Number of books borrowed from libraries and types of books

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The graph demonstrates the quantity of books that have been borrowed in four different libraries for a period of four month, with the pie chart shows the preferences of lent books in the percentage. The Ryeslip library had had the highest figure accounted for 300 by June, whereas the Sutton Wood library reached that point in September. While the incentives of Ryeslip were experiencing a decrease by 100, the proportion of Sutton Wood had a slight fluctuation throughout a period. The figures of West Eaton and Church Mount both started with trend amounted to 50 exemplars which was the lowest, then they tripled their initial results( 150). In terms of preferences, less than a half of all borrowed books were fiction novels, a hefty 43%, while the most uninteresting was self-help literature( a mere 10%). The same correlation had history and scientific literature. On the contrary, biographical books were more appealing than historical ones. ( 19% and 14% respectively). Overall, the data indicates that many people take books from library and the most popular type of books is fiction.
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the preferences of lent
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in the percentage. The
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library had had the highest figure accounted for 300 by June, whereas the Sutton Wood library reached that point in September. While the incentives of
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were experiencing a decrease by 100, the proportion of Sutton Wood had a slight fluctuation throughout a period. The figures of West Eaton and Church Mount both
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with trend amounted to 50 exemplars which was the lowest, then they tripled their initial results
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150). In terms of preferences, less than a half of all borrowed
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were fiction novels, a hefty 43%, while the most uninteresting was self-
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literature
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(
a mere 10%). The same correlation had history and scientific literature.
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, biographical
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were more appealing than historical ones.
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).
Overall
, the data indicates that
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is fiction.
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