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Caribbean island 2010-2017

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In the first seven years the millions of visitors of number of visitors of tourists a Caribbean island on island was higher than visitors staying on cruise ships. but after 2015 visitors staying on cruise ships become an increase more than island in 2017 the graph indicates that total was the most abruptly, with approximately 2. The figure rose to around 2. 5 in 2014 on the contrary then they were a dramatically trend until 2016, whole total was higher in the most of the period a given. The rose slightly in 2015, remain continued the same to growing for remaining constant at this until 2015, there was a marginal a peak of the following after year Overall, cruise ship has always been fairly prosperous with total but visitors staying on island offenses committed changed to dropped considerably during the period
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first
seven years the millions of
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visitors
of number of
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visitors
of tourists a Caribbean island on island was higher than
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visitors
staying on cruise ships.

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but
after 2015
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visitors
staying on cruise ships become an increase more than island

in 2017 the graph indicates that total was the most
abruptly
, with approximately

2. The figure rose to around 2. 5 in 2014
on the contrary
then they were a
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dramatically trend
until 2016, whole total was higher in the most of the period a
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given
.

The rose
slightly
in 2015, remain continued the same to growing for remaining constant

at this until 2015, there was a marginal a peak of the following after year

Overall
, cruise ship has always been
fairly
prosperous with total
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but
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visitors
staying on island offenses committed
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changed
to dropped
considerably
during the period
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IELTS academic Caribbean island 2010-2017

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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