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Car exports in three regions from 2013 to 2017.

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The line graph presents the information of motor vehicle exporting activity in three different areas within five years from 2013 to 2017. In general, UK experienced a significant increase gradually whilst Europe had rapid changes and unstable. Moreover, the USA had a slight increase at the beginning dan remain stable, however, it dropped at the end of the period. Initially, the United kingdom started from 20 thousand car units that were exported but in the next year, it dropped slightly to under 20 thousand. Furthermore, it had a gradual increase to almost 40 thousand. While there was a slight rise at first in Europe from 30 thousand to just over 30 thousand but it changed rapidly to the peak of 40 thousand. On the other hand, in 2013, the United State of America exported a little less than 10 thousand automobile units and the number rose in 2014 to almost 20 thousand. Then, it remained stable until 2016 and it declined to less than 10 thousand at the end of the period.
The line graph presents the information of motor vehicle exporting activity in three
different
areas within five years from 2013 to 2017.
In general
, UK experienced a significant increase
gradually
whilst Europe had rapid
changes
and unstable.
Moreover
, the USA had a slight increase at the beginning
dan
remain stable,
however
, it dropped at the
end
of the period.

Initially
, the
United kingdom
started
from 20 thousand car units that
were exported
but
in the
next
year, it dropped
slightly
to under 20 thousand.
Furthermore
, it had a gradual increase to almost 40 thousand. While there was a slight rise at
first
in Europe from 30 thousand to
just
over 30 thousand
but
it
changed
rapidly
to the peak of 40 thousand.

On the other hand
, in 2013, the United State of America exported a
little
less than 10 thousand automobile units and the number rose in 2014 to almost 20 thousand. Then, it remained stable until 2016 and it declined to less than 10 thousand at the
end
of the period.
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IELTS academic Car exports in three regions from 2013 to 2017.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
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