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The given chart illustrates the figuges of self employed workers in 5 different nations in western in both 2 periods 1998 and 2008

The given chart illustrates the figuges of self employed workers in 5 different nations in western in both 2 periods 1998 and 2008 M3JbN
The given chart illustrates the figuges of self employed workers in 5 different nations in western in both 2 periods 1998 and 2008 The most striking point is that had the highest figures in both 2 years, but the figure in 1998 was significant higher. In addition, Turkey also expericened the most signigicant changed from 19980 to 2008 At can be seen from the chart, Russian republic had the smallest number in 1998 with approrimately 5 % and has a modest raise to 6 % after 10 years. In addition, slovakia and Czech republic ranked fourth and fifth and 1998 with 6% and 11% respectively, followed by sightly increased to 11 % and 15 % in 2008 but the ranked remained unchanged. Look in the chart for more details, Greece ranked second in 1998 but the figure was significant higher than the third, which was triple Czech republic with roughly 42%. However, the figure of Greece dramatically decreased to 34% after 10 years.
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nations in western in both 2 periods 1998 and 2008

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in both 2 years,
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in 1998 was significant higher.
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Czech republic
ranked fourth and fifth and 1998 with 6% and 11%
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increased to 11 % and 15 % in 2008
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the ranked remained unchanged.

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, Greece ranked second in 1998
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was significant higher than the third, which was triple
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Czech republic
with roughly 42%.
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of Greece
dramatically
decreased to 34% after 10 years.
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the figuges of self employed workers in 5 different nations in western in both 2 periods 1998 and 2008

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