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The bar chart outlines Asian exports to the United States in 1992 in percentage of total exports.

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This bar chart showcases the trend in the use of cheques and electronic payments in New Zealand and the data ranges from 1993 to 2003. The percentages of the different contemporary payments are being measured. Use of cheques is evidently decreasing in a linear fashion; in the year 1993, around 54% of the people used cheques, whereas the percentage drops to nearly 12% in the year 2003. On the other hand, the use of direct debit cards and credit cards are on the rise from 1993. Both payment types start with less than 10% in 1993, however direct debit card usage has increased at a greater rate than credit cards. In 2003, almost 40% of the people surveyed used debit cards, nevertheless, the popularity of credit cards is on par with the cheques, maybe a tad bit greater. In conclusion, the use of cheques is on the negative trend. Conversely, direct debit cards and credit cards are on the rise, with debit cards leading eminently.

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