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The information aboutthe six items that were purchased by four european conutries, has been depicted in the rendered bar graph.

The information aboutthe six items that were purchased by four european conutries, has been depicted in the rendered bar graph. pXjn9

It is crystal clear from the bar graph that the highest amount spent on toys and photographic film by Britain, that was above 160, 000 pounds sterling. Germany people gave less interest for purchasing these six consumer goods, whereas under 160, 000pounds sterling amount utlized on three items by britain, which were perfume, tennis racquets and personal stereos, France had been spent similar amount on two goods, that were cds ang toys, nearly 150, 000 pounds sterling as compared to other material. Moving futher, above 150, 000 pounds sterling was utilized by italy on toys and photographic film. Itlay dwellers gave less perference to but other four goods, was approximately 150 thousands pounds sterling, while, France spent above 140, 000 ponds sterling on tennis racquets and perfumes. Overall, Britain spent highest money on all consumer goods as compared to other countries.

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