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The photo below illustrates the structure of an airport now and the changes of it after rebuilding next year

The photo below illustrates the structure of an airport now and the changes of it after rebuilding next year 2KAnX
The photo below illustrates the structure of an airport now and the changes of it after rebuilding next year. Overall, it will be expanded with more gates. We will have the addition of other new facilities in the airport to make pasengers fell more comfort. Recently, the airport is divided into three segments: departures, arrivals and the north side. There is security, passport control, a cafe shop and a check-in counter in the left. About the right part, there is also passport control and customs. The airport has eight gates- connected with a walkway at the north side. By the following year, this building will be installed ten more gates at the northeast and northwesft side. All gates will be connected with a sky train so that passengers can have more convenience. The cafe is going to be moved to the left bottom. Next, the check- in will be also replaced by a bag drop room and relocated at old position of cafe shop. A new cafe and an ATM will be build at the east of the airport on the right side. Moreover, people will enlagre the space on the right side for car hire. Two departures and two arrivals gate doors would be installed. Besides, security, passport control and customs will be remained unchanged.
The photo below illustrates the structure of an
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changes
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year.
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, it will
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with more
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gates
. We will have the addition of other new facilities in the
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airport
to
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pasengers
fell more comfort.

Recently, the
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airport
is divided
into three segments: departures, arrivals and the north side. There is security, passport control, a
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cafe
shop and a
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check
-in counter in the
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left
. About the right part, there is
also
passport control and customs. The
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airport
has eight
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gates-
connected with a walkway at the north side.

By the following year, this building will
be installed
ten more
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gates
at the northeast and
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northwesft
side. All
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gates
will
be connected
with a sky train
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that passengers can have more convenience. The
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cafe
is going to be
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moved
to the
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left
bottom.
Next
, the
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- in will be
also
replaced by a bag drop room and relocated at
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old
position of
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cafe
shop. A new
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cafe
and an ATM will be build at the east of the
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airport
on the right side.
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,
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will
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enlagre
the space on the right side for car hire. Two departures and two arrivals
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doors would
be installed
.
Besides
, security, passport control and customs will
be remained
unchanged.
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IELTS academic The photo below illustrates the structure of an airport now and the changes of it after rebuilding next year

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