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Boys and girls playing sports in England in 2021

Boys and girls playing sports in England in 2021 bQA13
The bar chart illustrates how many number of boys and girls playing six different sports in English town in 2012. Overall, It is clear that the number of boys playing sports exceeded that of girls in 4 different sports. The significant difference in both gender by count is in football. The most popular sports among boys is football and least preferred one by both genders is Hockey. Girls were highly interested in swimming and badminton with slight difference in gender count by men. There were four sports category in which boys players were more than girls. The major part of football count was filled by 60 boys in comparison to only 20 girls. Similarly, boys count was 50 in tennis and girls were at 35. In cycling, boys players were almost double of girls counts at 20. Lastly, hockey was the only sports that was least favored by both genders. On the other hand, Girls players highest count marked in swimming and badminton, both with the slight difference of about 10 between both genders. Women count of 50 preferred swimming whereas, 40 were interested in badminton,
The bar chart illustrates how
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many number
of
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boys
and
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girls
playing six
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different
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sports
in English town in 2012.
Overall
, It is
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clear
that the number of
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boys
playing
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sports
exceeded that of
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girls
in 4
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different
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sports
. The significant difference in both gender by
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count
is in football. The most popular
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sports
among
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boys
is football and least preferred one by both genders is Hockey.
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Girls
were
highly
interested in swimming and badminton with slight difference in gender
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count
by
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men
. There were four
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sports
category in which
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boys
players were more than
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girls
. The major part of football
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count
was filled
by 60
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boys
in comparison
to
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only
20
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girls
.
Similarly
,
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boys
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count
was 50 in tennis and
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girls
were at 35. In cycling,
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boys
players were almost double of
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girls
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counts
at 20.
Lastly
, hockey was the
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only
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sports
that was least favored by both genders.
On the other hand
,
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Girls
players
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highest
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count
marked in swimming and badminton, both with the slight difference of about 10 between both genders. Women
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count
of 50 preferred swimming whereas, 40
were interested
in badminton,
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IELTS academic Boys and girls playing sports in England in 2021

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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