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asian elephants in bar charts

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This bar graph depicts the differences in the maximum number of asian elephants between the period 1994 to 2004. It is clear from the graph that there is many countries that have an estimated maximum population of asian elephants. According to what is shown India has the highest numbers of asian elephants up to almost 10. 000 in 1997 and 7500 in 2004 and that shows a dip between the year 1997 to 2004 in india, in the other hand china has the lowest numbers wich is not higher than 2500, most of the populations didn’t reach it also, we can see that the year 1997 has soared in many populations while the year 2004 experienced a drop. To sum up the only country that was higher that the others is india as apposed to china
This bar graph depicts the differences in the maximum number of
asian
elephants between the period 1994 to 2004. It is
clear
from the graph that there is
many
countries that have an estimated maximum population of
asian
elephants.

According to what
is shown
India has the highest numbers of
asian
elephants up to almost 10. 000 in 1997 and 7500 in 2004 and that
shows
a dip between the year 1997 to 2004 in
india
, in the other hand china has the lowest numbers
wich
is not higher than 2500, most of the populations didn’t reach it
also
, we can
see
that the year 1997 has soared in
many
populations while the year 2004 experienced a drop.

To sum up the
only
country that was higher that the others is
india
as apposed to
china
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