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the map about barbonated drink production

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The diagram above details how to produce drinks with a carbonation method. Overall, water has to pass many steps which are divided into 5 main stages; beginning with water was filtered to be cleaned following by evaporation associated with carbonation, mixing in the storage tank and flowing and sealing each bottle or can then it is packed and sent to the market. The process starts at a water cleaning station which water flows through a filter and adds special chemicals in then it has pumped to an electric heater to transform it become stream and reduced temperature im cooling pipe that attaches with a tank which carbon dioxide is filled. From there, water flows to the mixing tank to add more 3 ingredients, filled one more time then sealing in bottles and cans respectively. And sending their packages to the supermarket is the last process.

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