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Bar charts about road transport

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The bar charts give data on road transport in seven countries of Europe (Denmark, France, Italy, United Kingdom, Germany, Spain and EU Average). In general, there are three types of bar charts. The first two bar charts present information in kilometres per year while the last one in minutes per day in both ways. As can seen the kilometres per year of travel per person by car compared to kilometres per year of travel per person by bus, train, metro and bike are more higher in fact, it can be clearly seen that the numbers of kilometres per year of the first bar chart exceed 12000 km instead of the second bar chart that has numbers under 3000 km. The first chart shows that the state in which people do more kilometres by car is Denmark and the opposite is Spain (around 12000 km and 8500 km, respectively). The second chart presents very strong differences between the seven countries. As can be seen the country that presents a high number of kilometres per year by bus, train, metro and bike is Denmark with almost 3000 km, while the country that has the lowest number of kilometres per year is France with almost 1000 km. In both of first two bar charts Denmark is the country with the higher number of kilometres. It can be clearly seen that there is also a big difference with the number of kilometres per year for EU average in first and in second chart (around 10000 km and 1000 km, respectively). The datas of the third bar chart compared to the first two charts are almost different because in the last bar chart is clear that United Kingdom is the country that used all modes in minutes per day more than the others
The bar
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charts
give data on road transport in seven
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countries
of Europe (Denmark, France, Italy, United Kingdom, Germany, Spain and EU Average).
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, there are three types of bar
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charts
. The
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first
two bar
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charts
present information in
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kilometres
per
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year
while the last one in minutes per day in both ways. As can
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seen
the
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kilometres
per
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year
of travel per person by car compared to
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kilometres
per
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year
of travel per person by bus, train, metro and bike are
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more higher
in fact, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the
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numbers
of
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kilometres
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year
of the
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first
bar
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exceed 12000 km
instead
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that has
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numbers
under 3000 km. The
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first
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people
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by car is Denmark and the opposite is Spain (around 12000 km and 8500 km,
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). The second
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presents
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strong differences between the seven
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countries
. As can be
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country
that presents a high
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of
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kilometres
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by bus, train, metro and bike is Denmark with almost 3000 km, while the
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country
that has the lowest
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number
of
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is France with almost 1000 km. In both of
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two bar
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Denmark is the
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country
with the higher
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number
of
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kilometres
. It can be
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for EU average in
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(around 10000 km and 1000 km,
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compared to the
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are almost
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in the last bar
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is
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that United Kingdom is the
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used
all modes in minutes per day more than the
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IELTS academic Bar charts about road transport

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