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Changes of university sport court from 1990 to the present day

Changes of university sport court from 1990 to the present day aQK3P
The maps depict how a university sports courts changed from 1990 to the precent day. looking from an overall perspective, it is conspicuous that the sport court witnessed dramatic changes throughout the period and extremely modernized with new facilities In 1990, there was a park which located in the north-west side of the court, which was chopped down to make way for basketball court. Also, there was a car park, however, in present day, has been replaced by the tennis court, which has been expanded with two blocks. The cafe and the reception remained the same position throughout the period. The outdoor pool, located in the north-east side of Court has been converted into the indoor pool. In the meantime, the changing room has been moved to the beside side of the reception. Finally, the fitness centre has replaced two tennis courts, now outside the main building.
The maps depict how a university sports
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courts
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changed
from 1990 to the
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precent
day.
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looking
from an
overall
perspective, it is conspicuous that the sport
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court
witnessed dramatic
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changes
throughout the period and
extremely
modernized with new facilities

In 1990, there was a park which located in the north-west side of the
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court
, which
was chopped
down to
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make
way for basketball
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court
.
Also
, there was a car park,
however
, in present day, has
been replaced
by the tennis
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court
, which has
been expanded
with two blocks.

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cafe
and the reception remained the same position throughout the period. The outdoor pool, located in the north-east side of
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Court
has
been converted
into the indoor pool. In the meantime, the changing room has been
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moved
to the beside side of the reception.
Finally
, the fitness
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centre
has replaced two tennis
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courts
,
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now
outside the main building.
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