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The maps illustrate the main changes which have takes place in COLWick Arts Centre from 2005

The maps illustrate the main changes which have takes place in COLWick Arts Centre from 2005 9aPyx
The maps illustrate the main changes which have takes place in COLWick Arts Centre from 2005 to the present moment. Overall, the center expanded and new recreational facilities such as cinema café and drama studio. At present outside area dramatic change happening, trees were planted and outdoor exhibition area has maked stage in addition seating were added. Looking more closely in center, the toilets smaller and toward the east wing. in the past there is a meeting room but now which is discriminate two part but also moved at the top. at that time the concert hall, cinema were in the same position while now are separate. Additionally, the gallerys were in east that had been removed and have converted a gallery west. In summary, the COLWick Arts Centre is modernised and developed than in 2005
The maps illustrate the main
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changes
which have takes place in
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COLWick
Arts
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Centre
from 2005 to the present moment.
Overall
, the center expanded and new recreational facilities such as cinema café and drama studio.

At present outside area dramatic
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change
happening, trees
were planted
and outdoor exhibition area has
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maked
stage
in addition
seating were
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added
.

Looking more
closely
in center, the toilets smaller and toward the east wing.
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in
the past there is a meeting room
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but
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now
which is
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discriminate
two part
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but
also
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moved
at the top.
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at
that time the concert hall, cinema were in the same position while
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now
are separate.
Additionally
, the
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gallerys
were in east that had
been removed
and have converted a gallery west.

In summary, the
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COLWick
Arts
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Centre
is
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modernised
and developed than in 2005

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