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The graph below shows the difference in three different spreads in 1981 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the difference in three different spreads in 1981 to 2007. DNloW
The line chart provided illustrates the consumption of margarine, butter, low fat and reduced spreads from the year 1981 to 2007 It is observed that the consumption of butter and margarine has been experiencing a sharp declining trend. On the other hand, low fat and reduced spreads consumption had a good upward trend but began to decline in the recent years. The consumption of butter increased from 140 grams to 160 grams during the period 1981 to 1986. But afterwards it began to decline sharply and in 2007 it was found that the annual consumption rate of butter was around 40 grams. Besides, the consumption of margarine experienced a downward trend in 1986 which amounted 80 grams. But, in 1991 the consumption of butter increased to 100 grams and has remained stable up to 1996. In 2007, it was found that it’s consumption decreased to 40 grams. The consumption of low fat and reduced spreads started in 1996. In 2001, around 80 grams of low fat and reduced spreads was consumed which was more than the consumption of margarine in that year.
The line chart provided illustrates the
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consumption
of
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margarine
,
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butter
,
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
from the year 1981 to 2007

It
is observed
that the
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consumption
of
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butter
and
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margarine
has been experiencing a sharp declining trend.
On the other hand
,
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
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consumption
had a
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good
upward trend
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but
began to decline in the recent years.

The
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consumption
of
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butter
increased from 140
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grams
to 160
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grams
during the period 1981 to 1986.
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But
afterwards it began to decline
sharply
and in 2007 it
was found
that the annual
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consumption
rate of
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butter
was around 40
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grams
.
Besides
, the
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consumption
of
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margarine
experienced a downward trend in 1986 which amounted 80
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grams
.
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But
, in 1991 the
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consumption
of
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butter
increased to 100
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grams
and has remained stable up to 1996. In 2007, it
was found
that it’s
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consumption
decreased to 40 grams.

The
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consumption
of
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
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started
in 1996. In 2001, around 80
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grams
of
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
was consumed
which was more than the
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consumption
of
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margarine
in that year.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the difference in three different spreads in 1981 to 2007.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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