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bar chart of electricity consumption in 10 top countries

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The bar chart illustrates consumption of electricity in best ten countries in the world in the year of 2014. Overall, we can see clearly on the bar chart, China is one the first position and the bottom rank is Republic of Korea. China is the biggest country in case of production and consumption of electricity in 2014, which is 5, 398 billion kWh for production and 5, 322 for consumption. Following by United States that occupied the second position among the other ten countries due to people in United Stated spent 3, 866 kWh and produced 4, 099 billion kWh electricity. In the third rank is Russia. In 2014, they successfully produced 1, 057 billion kWh and their residents consumed electricity for 1, 038 billion kWh. On the other hand, the two lowest countries in that chart are Germany and Republic of Korea. Germany has made 526. 6 billion kWh and consumed 582. 5 billion kWh in 2014. While Republic of Korea has spent 449. 5 billion kWh and produced 485. 1 billion kWh electricity.

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