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Describe abouts outlined Home water system

Describe abouts outlined Home water system RVV5P
The diagram provides an overview of a domestic Central heating system. it show how to the tank, boiler and pipes ensure a constant flow of hot waters to bath the radiator and the tap. cold water enter the house and is storaged in a water storage tank in the roof. Form there u flow down to the boiler, located an the ground floor of house. First fall cold water enter in the home throughout pipiline and storage in storage tank. it is heated by boilers steam which can heated water tank and cold water flow small tubes through comes in the hot water radiator and reach at boilers help by the pump. which make hot water in boilers and Move on tank and supply at taps with pipe. Once the water has been through pipe and surrounded, it is saturated to boilers to be recruited.
The diagram provides an overview of a domestic Central heating system.
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it
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show
how to the
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tank
,
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boiler
and pipes ensure a constant flow of hot
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waters
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to bath
the radiator and the tap.
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cold
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water
enter the
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house
and is
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storaged
in a
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water
storage
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tank
in the roof. Form there u flow down to the
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boiler
, located
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an
the
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ground floor
of
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house
.
First
fall
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cold
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water
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enter in the home
throughout
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pipiline
and storage in storage
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tank
.
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it
is heated
by
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boilers
steam which can heated
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water
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tank
and
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cold
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water
flow
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small
tubes through
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comes
in the hot
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water
radiator and reach at
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boilers
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help
by the pump.
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which
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make
hot
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water
in
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boilers
and
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Move
on
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tank
and supply at taps with pipe. Once the
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water
has been through pipe and surrounded, it
is saturated
to
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boilers
to
be recruited
.
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IELTS academic Describe abouts outlined Home water system

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145 words
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