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information regarding the average price of tickets and below given column graph expect the average sales of ticket during 2010 to 2011. In the line graph the average price of ticket remained constant in quarter 1 and 7: 45 9. 25 lb however after 3 months it was plastically increase and reach at 10. 5 found by quarter 3 of 2010 it was again remained unchanged from quarter 3 of 2010 to Kottur to of 2011 at 10. 5 pound (2. 27 kg) it was decrease in 2: 45 of 2011 to 10. 25 found from Kota 32 quarter 4 of 2011 it was inclined to 10. 5 lbs. The column graph show the contribution by quarter 1 and quarter to Word 2010 remained unchanged at 60% where is it was declined to 57% in quarter 3 of 2010 by quarter 4 of 2010 it had experienced arise to 80% of tickets sold in contrast contribution by quarter 1 and quarter to of 2011 remained constant at 20% whereas it was England from 45 % in quarter 3 to 70% in quarter 4 of 2011. Overall it can be concluded that the average price of ticket was increase in 2011 does less tickets sold in 2011 Den 2010.
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and below
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sales of
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ticket
during 2010 to 2011.

In the line graph the
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average
price of
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ticket
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remained
constant in
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quarter
1 and 7: 45 9.
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25 lb
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after 3 months it was
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plastically
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and reach at 10. 5 found by
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quarter
3 of 2010 it was again
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remained
unchanged from
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quarter
3 of 2010 to
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Kottur
to of 2011 at 10.
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5 pound
(2. 27 kg) it was decrease in 2: 45 of 2011 to 10. 25 found from
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Kota
32
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quarter
4 of 2011 it
was inclined
to 10. 5 lbs.

The column graph
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the contribution by
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1 and
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to Word 2010
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remained
unchanged at 60% where is it
was declined
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quarter
3 of 2010 by
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4 of 2010 it had experienced arise to 80% of
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tickets
sold
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1 and
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to of 2011
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remained
constant at 20% whereas it was England from 45 % in
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3 to 70% in
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4 of 2011.

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it can
be concluded
that the
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average
price of
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ticket
was increase in 2011 does
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tickets
sold in 2011 Den 2010.
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IELTS academic average price of tickets and below given column graph expect the average sales of ticket during 2010 to 2011.

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