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The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The infographics below illustrate the development of a cinema over the past 40 years. Overall, a comparison of two diagrams indicates that there are more facilities and amenities in the cinema now than it was in the past. In 1980, there was car park at the top end of the building, but now the construction has no place for parking vehicles, while the entrance to the cinema building is still located in the middle. The most noticeable is that there are more cinema rooms now. In addition, DVD Shop, relax room and food court sprang up at the bottom end of the building. Only the toilet and the ticket office remained in the same place. Drinks court was replaced by DVD shop, while the cinema number one was substituted by food and drinks court and relax room. New cinemas number three, four and five have been added and located in the right-hand and left-hand side of the entrance.
The infographics below illustrate the development of a
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over the past 40 years.

Overall
, a comparison of two diagrams indicates that there are more facilities and amenities in the
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cinema
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now
than it was in the past.

In 1980, there was car park at the top
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end
of the building,
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now
the construction has no place for parking vehicles, while the entrance to the
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building is
still
located in the middle. The most noticeable is that there are more
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cinema
rooms
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now
.
In addition
, DVD Shop, relax room and food court sprang up at the bottom
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end
of the building.

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Only
the toilet and the ticket office remained in the same place. Drinks court
was replaced
by DVD shop, while the
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cinema
number one
was substituted
by food and drinks court and relax room. New
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cinemas
number three, four and five have been
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added
and located in the right-hand and
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left
-hand side of the entrance.
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