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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given chart focuses on consumption of sodium, saturated fats and added sugar in breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks of average USA individual. According to the research, out of four meal the intake of all two nutrients which is sodium component, and saturated fats is precisely consumed the maximum during dinner and least intake is analyzed at breakfast. Although an average American like more of sugar during their snack break. Highest utilization of components during dinner is sodium leading with 43%, intake of sodium nutrient in lunch meal 29% and least intake is notified at snacks. At dinner an average USA individual consumes 37% of saturated fats, followed by 26%, 21% and 16% in lunch, snacks and breakfast meal respectively. Maximum use of sugar is evidently found during snack time, that is 42%, minimum consumption is during breakfast. Dinner and lunch have a moderate percentage of 23% and 19% respectively.
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chart focuses on consumption of sodium, saturated fats and
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added
sugar in
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breakfast
, lunch,
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dinner
and
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snacks
of average USA individual.

According to the research, out of four meal the
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intake
of all two nutrients which is sodium component, and saturated fats is
precisely
consumed the maximum during
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dinner
and least
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intake
is analyzed
at
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breakfast
.
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Although
an average American like more of sugar during their
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snack
break.

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Highest
utilization of components during
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dinner
is sodium leading with 43%,
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intake
of sodium nutrient in lunch meal 29% and least
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intake
is notified
at snacks.

At
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dinner
an average USA individual consumes 37% of saturated fats, followed by 26%, 21% and 16% in lunch,
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snacks
and
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breakfast
meal
respectively
.

Maximum
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use
of sugar is
evidently
found during
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snack
time,
that is
42%, minimum consumption is during
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breakfast
.
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Dinner
and lunch have a moderate percentage of 23% and 19%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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