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The bar chart below shows the popularity of well known instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well known instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021. kxqw8
The given bar chart provides the information about the popularity of famous influencers in the instagram in a time period of one decade. It is clear that, Cristiano Ronaldo had break the record by getting just over 300 million followers in 2021 compared with 3 years back. There is a drastic change in the amount of people followed their respective influencers throughout the year. Selena Gomez was the leading instagram influencer in 2018 with approximately 125 million followers. But gradually, the remaining influencers except Cristiano Ronaldo have got almost 2 million followers more than Selena Gomez compared with the year 2018 and 2021. The influencers, The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner maintained almost the same number of followers during the year 2021. However, Cristiano Ronaldo is more active in instagram as a great influencer with a good amount of instagram followers, compared with 2018. Although, the rest of the instagram accounts also have a good fanbase with almost equal number of followers.
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in a time period of one decade. It is
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that, Cristiano Ronaldo had break the record by getting
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over 300 million
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followers
in 2021 compared with 3 years back. There is a drastic
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change
in the amount of
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people
followed their respective influencers throughout the
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year
. Selena Gomez was the leading
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instagram
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influencer
in 2018 with approximately 125 million
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followers
.
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gradually
, the remaining influencers except Cristiano Ronaldo have
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almost 2 million
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followers
more than Selena Gomez compared with the
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2018 and 2021. The influencers, The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner maintained almost the same number of
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during the
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2021.
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instagram
as a great
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with a
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amount of
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instagram
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, compared with 2018.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the popularity of well known instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.

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