Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

amount of water being used among countries

amount of water being used among countries XqnRY

The chart shows the percentage of water used for industry, agriculture, and domestic in the following countries North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia. The amount of water used for agriculture is high in most of the countries. Central Asia scores the highest with 88%, then Africa with the 2nd score 84%, then comes South Asia with a score of 81%, and finally we have South America with a score of 71%. As you can see there is a major drop in this percentage in North America with a score pf 39% which is slightly greater than that scored in Europe 15%. On the contrast, South America, Europe, and North America, show high percentages of water used in domestic, with a score of 19%, 15%, and 13% respectively. However Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia, show lower amounts of water being used in this field, with scores of 9%, and &% respectively. Finally, the measurements of water used in industry show that Europe spend 53%, with the highest score, then North America with 48%, which is greater than that used in South East Asia 12%, then comes South America with 10%, and finally we have Africa, and Central Asia with the lowest amounts 7%, and 5% respectively.

The chart You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
shows
 the percentage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for industry, agriculture, and domestic in the following countries You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 America, South America, Europe, Africa, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparamountkeyimportantpivotalfundamentalbasic
Central
 Asia, South East Asia.

The amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for agriculture is high in most of the countries. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparamountkeyimportantpivotalfundamentalbasic
Central
 Asia You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
scores
 the highest with 88%, then Africa with the 2nd You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
score
 84%, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 South Asia with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
score
 of 81%, and finally
 we have South America with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
score
 of 71%. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 there is a major drop in this percentage in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 America with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
score
 pf 39% which is slightly
 greater than that scored in Europe 15%.

On the contrast, South America, Europe, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 America, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
show
 high percentages of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in domestic, with a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
score
 of 19%, 15%, and 13% respectively
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 Africa, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparamountkeyimportantpivotalfundamentalbasic
Central
 Asia, and South East Asia, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
show
 lower amounts of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in this field, with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
scores
 of 9%, and Possible spelling mistake found.
&%
respectively
.

Finally
, the measurements of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in industry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
show
 that Europe spend 53%, with the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcountaccountgradeamountaveragetally
score
, then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 America with 48%, which is greater than that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in South East Asia 12%, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 South America with 10%, and finally
 we have Africa, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withparamountkeyimportantpivotalfundamentalbasic
Central
 Asia with the lowest amounts 7%, and 5% respectively
. 