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aluminum recycling process is well described in the below given diagram.

aluminum recycling process is well described in the below given diagram. Jq8wa

7 stages of the aluminum recycling process is well described in the below given diagram. Overall, in the first half of the process, scrape aluminum in collected from the garbage. Comparatively, in the second half, the recycling process is achieved through multiple stages and making it finally to be reusable. In the beginning, used cans are collected in the separate garbage collector, which are further carried away by truck in the next step. Later all the collected aluminum is washed and separated it from impurities. Further they are cut and pressed down to utilize more space. All compressed aluminum in next step is transformed to a liquid state. Furthermore, liquid aluminum is cooled down and giving them a shape of rolling sheets of size 2. 5 to 6 mm in thickness. These sheets are further used to make a new can which is later used to server packed food and beverages. In some countries specially UK, recycling of cans is up to 74%, which not only helps in utilizing waste product but also keep our environment clean.

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aluminum
 recycling process is well This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizedportrayed
described
 in the below This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram.

Overall
, in the first
 half of the process, scrape You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
aluminum
 in collected from the garbage. Comparatively
, in the second half, the recycling process is achieved
 through multiple stages and making it finally
 to be reusable.

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used
 cans are collected
 in the separate garbage collector, which are further
 carried away by truck in the next
 step. Later all the collected You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
aluminum
is washed
 and separated it from impurities. Further
 they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 and pressed down to utilize more space. All compressed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
aluminum
 in next
 step is transformed
 to a liquid state.

Furthermore
, liquid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
aluminum
is cooled
 down and giving them a shape of rolling sheets of size 2. 5 to 6 mm in thickness. These sheets are further
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used
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make
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can which
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used
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some
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 UK, recycling of cans is up to 74%, which not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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helps
 in utilizing waste product This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
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keep
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