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All illustration of people of various ages who use different gadgets. Summarize the information by pointing the most important features and make comparisms where necessary

All illustration of people of various ages who use different gadgets. QLRXy

The bar chart illustrates data for the number of e-book readers through four technological devices (cell phones, desktops or laptops, e-readers and tablets) among people of ages 16 to over 30 years. Overall, the data on the chart shows that the highest used gadget was the desktop or laptop. The younger group of people made more use of cell phones way more than they did the tablets and e-readers, with the tablets being the least used by both age groups. The older-aged individuals recorded the e-reader as their best tools for accessing e-books. The younger-aged group (which were 166 people in number, aged 16-29 years) were unveiled as the highest users of or laptops, with a jaw-breaking 55 percent. However, there seemed to be a decrease in their interest in the other various devices, as only 41 percent made of use of cell phones, which was not too poor, as compared to the e-readers and tablets, where they recorded 23 and 16 percents, respectively. The individuals of age 30 years and above were declared the highest users of the e-reader device with a whopping 46 percent of them making use of it. Furthermore, it was seen as shown in the chart that they did not maintain the status quo while operating the other devices. There was a steady decline in relation to their activities on desktops, tablets and cell phones, with 38, 26 and 25 percents, respectively.

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cell
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