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the maps below show the changes that have been taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2021 and its plan for the future

the maps below show the changes that have been taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2021 and its plan for the future VPVBD
The given maps illustrate the information about the current structure of area at the seaside resort of Templeton and the alterations that will occur in future. Overall, it can be seen clearly that the given sea side of the resort is predicted to be changed in the directions accept Northwest and it will come more developed. Going into the details, currently, there is a river in the centre which flow from a sea on the south side to the North side. In the West direction of river, there are a number of individual houses present. In the addition to it, there are also some tall buildings. In the east side, school and hospital is situated with the housing facilities and trees. In the opposite side of it, most of area is covered with trees and some houses. In the same side, there is a railway station. Moving further, in future, in west side of the river, houses are expected to be change into the apartments. Moreover, it is projected that most of trees will cut down in order to construct a supermarket and houses. According to the prediction, school and hospital will remain at same place but some new facilites will be added sach as airport and houses. In the opposite direction, construction of factory is projected. Railway track also estimated to be extended.
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current
structure of area at the seaside resort of Templeton and the alterations that will occur
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in future
.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
clearly
that the
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given
sea side of the resort
is predicted
to be
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changed
in the directions accept Northwest and it will
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come
more developed.

Going into the
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details
,
currently
, there is a river in the
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centre
which flow from a sea on the south side to the North side. In the West direction of river, there are a number of individual
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houses
present. In the addition to it, there are
also
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some
tall buildings.
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In
the east side, school and hospital
is situated
with the housing facilities and trees.
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In
the opposite side of it,
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most of area
is covered
with trees and
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some
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houses
.
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In
the same side, there is a railway station.

Moving
further
,
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in future
, in west side of the river,
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houses
are
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expected
to be
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change
into the apartments.
Moreover
, it
is projected
that
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most of trees
will
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cut
down in order to construct a supermarket and
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houses
. According to the prediction, school and hospital will remain at same place
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but
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some
new
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facilites
will be
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added
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sach as
airport and
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houses
. In the opposite direction, construction of factory
is projected
. Railway
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track
also
estimated to
be extended
.
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IELTS academic the maps below show the changes that have been taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2021 and its plan for the future

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