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Cigarette Production,exports,and domestic consumption

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The graph provides information about manufacturing, exports, domestic usages is cigarettes. Overall, it is clearly seen that, over the period, the production date of cigarette was high, whereas exporting of cigarette ganerally had the lowest trend. In the 1990, the figure of production cigarette showed exactly 700 billion and rise steadily before reaching a peak of precisely almost 750 billion in 1995. However, this inverse trend was broken and the opposite trend started to occur. During the following decade, the manufacturing level of cigarette witnessed a decline, falling from approximately 750 billion in 1995 to almost 550 billion in 2005. The total consumption indicated overall upward trend. In 1990 usages of cigarette began at 550 billion and started to decrease gradually until hitting a peak of exactly 400 billion. It can be observed that, flactuating trend was shown by figure of exporting. At the beginning of the period, exports of cigarettes stood at nearly 150 billion and rose slightly to reach just over 250 billion in 1995. Starting from 2000 it began to decline.
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that, over the period, the production date of
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was high, whereas exporting of
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ganerally
had the lowest
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trend
. In the 1990, the figure of production
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showed
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and rise
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before
reaching a peak of
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in 1995.
However
, this inverse
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trend
was broken
and the opposite
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started
to occur. During the following decade, the manufacturing level of
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witnessed a decline, falling from approximately 750
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billion
in 1995 to almost 550
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billion
in 2005. The total consumption indicated
overall
upward
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trend
. In 1990 usages of
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began at 550
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billion
and
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be observed
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flactuating
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trend
was shown
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stood at
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billion
and rose
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in 1995. Starting from 2000 it began to decline.
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IELTS academic Cigarette Production, exports, and domestic consumption

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