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the table below shows the types of music albums bought in britain according to age.

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The table shows bought different types of music albums in united kindom accoding to age. overall, we can clearly seen that, the fifty plus of age group bought classical music while Rock and pop was very least percentage. The age of (12-15) bought rock music album, accounding to 40%, while pop music album bought 20 percentage and classical 4 percantage. The age of 18-25 bought rock music album 38%, pop music ablum increase 2 percentage from age of (12-15). the classical music album bought 4 percentage, However, the age of 28-35 all those albums bought rock(28%), pop(26%) and classical (16%). The next age of 38 to 45, this ages group those album bought rock(20%) pop(22%) and classical (29%). when these age of group cross to 50 plus, it can see those group ages like to classical music rather than rock or pop music.
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