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The given bar chart indicates the number of visitors diversity of six art gallerys from six diffrent contries, like France, USA, UK, Korea, Spain and Russia. To begin, tge figure of visits in Russia, spain and Korea are roughly 3 millions which contains the lowest statistics in the graph The chart expresses that metropolitan museum and British museum are almost at the same level, the both are representing a close number to 6 million visitors. By far the most popular and famous museum to visit in 2011 were Louvre at approximately 9 million tickets sold, followed by metropolitan museum at 6 million. The national museum, museo del prado and state hermitage were for less popular at round 3 million visitors respectively.

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 which contains the lowest statistics in the graph

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 are almost at the same level, the both are representing a close number to 6 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 visitors.

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 to visit in 2011 were Louvre at approximately 9 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 tickets sold, followed by metropolitan You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
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 visitors respectively
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