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The diagram elucidates the process in which bricks are made up for construction industry.

The diagram elucidates the process in which bricks are made up for construction industry. N32Vq
To commence with, a raw material clay is used to make bricks which dug up by big digger from the ground. Then, clay is placed onto the metal grid which is used to breakdown through the roller. In the next stage, the sand and water is mixed in the clay mixture. In the subsequent stage, the clay mixture are converted into bricks from either mould or wire cutter. In the following stage, bricks are placed in the oven for two days. After the drying process is done by oven, the bricks are gone through the heating and cooling process. Afterwards, the Klinsmann are being used between moderate heat to high. (Ranging from 200c -980c and 870c-1300c respectively). Before packaging stage, the bricks are cooled in chamber for 48 to 72 hours. Finally, bricks are stored and sent to the destinations. Overall, the manufactured process have various stages. if one step is skipped the entire process is spoiled. the steps beginning with clay and culminating with delivery.
To commence with, a raw material
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clay
is
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used
to
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make
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bricks
which dug up by
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big
digger from the ground. Then,
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clay
is placed
onto the metal grid which is
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used
to breakdown through the roller. In the
next
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stage
, the sand and water
is mixed
in the
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clay
mixture. In the subsequent
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stage
, the
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clay
mixture
are converted
into
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bricks
from either
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mould
or wire cutter.
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In
the following
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stage
,
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bricks
are placed
in the oven for two days. After the drying
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process
is done
by oven, the
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bricks
are gone
through the heating and cooling
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process
. Afterwards, the
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Klinsmann
are being
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used
between moderate heat to high. (Ranging from 200c -980c and 870c-1300c
respectively
).
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Before
packaging
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stage
, the
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bricks
are cooled
in chamber for 48 to 72 hours.
Finally
,
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bricks
are stored
and
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sent
to the destinations.
Overall
, the manufactured
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process
have various
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stages
.
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if
one step
is skipped
the entire
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process
is spoiled
.
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the
steps beginning with
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clay
and culminating with delivery.
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IELTS academic The diagram elucidates the process in which bricks are made up for construction industry.

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