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rainwater collection for drinking

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The diagram shows the mechanism used in an Australian town for collecting rainwater in order to use as drinking water. Overall, rainwater collected from houses can be used for drinking after it has processed by a water filter and then being treated with chemicals. Initially, when the rainwater falls on the rooftops, it is carried to the drain with the help of gutters installed for this purpose. Each house collects rainwater in this way. The drain carries the rainwater through a water filter where it is processed for impurities. The filtered water is then sent to the storage tank where it is stored for future use. This collected water is then dispatched to the water treatment section where it is treated with chemicals to make it safe for drinking. The treated water is finally transferred to houses with the help of pipes that connect the water treatment tank and the houses.
The diagram
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the mechanism
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used
in an Australian town for collecting
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rainwater
in order to
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use
as drinking
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water
.
Overall
,
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rainwater
collected from
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houses
can be
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used
for drinking after it has processed by a
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water
filter and then
being treated
with chemicals.

Initially
, when the
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rainwater
falls on the rooftops, it
is carried
to the drain with the
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help
of gutters installed for this purpose. Each
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house
collects
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rainwater
in this way. The drain carries the
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rainwater
through a
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water
filter where it
is processed
for impurities. The filtered
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water
is then
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sent
to the storage tank where it
is stored
for future
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use
. This collected
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water
is then dispatched to the
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water
treatment section where it
is treated
with chemicals to
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make
it safe for drinking.

The treated
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water
is
finally
transferred to
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houses
with the
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help
of pipes that connect the
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water
treatment tank and the
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houses
.
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IELTS academic rainwater collection for drinking

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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