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the bar chart shows information about fiction book sales from 2006 to 2010

the bar chart shows information about fiction book sales from 2006 to 2010 53W5n
The given bar chart illustrates the money recieved from the sale of fiction books during the year varies from 2006-2010. There are five categories of books sold over the same period. To embark it, the highest earnings were recieved from sale of Romance books. In the second year, it demostrated the dramatic rise and the earnings were at 110, 000 dollars during the year 2007. After 2007, the earnings from the sale of Romance books plunged to 70, 000 dollars. The last two years again exhibited the slight rise in earnings. Also, the same trend had been showed by the books of Mystery in first two years. From 2008 to 2010, it was constant and ranged between 40, 000 to 50, 000 dollars during the period.
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recieved
from the sale of fiction
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books
during the
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year
varies from 2006-2010. There are five categories of
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books
sold over the same period.

To embark it, the highest
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earnings
were
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recieved
from sale of Romance
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books
. In the second
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year
, it
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demostrated
the dramatic rise and the
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earnings
were at 110, 000 dollars during the
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year
2007. After 2007, the
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earnings
from the sale of Romance
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books
plunged to 70, 000 dollars. The last two years again exhibited the slight rise in
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earnings
.
Also
, the same trend had been
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showed
by the
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books
of Mystery in
first
two years. From 2008 to 2010, it was constant and ranged between 40, 000 to 50, 000 dollars during the period.
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IELTS academic the bar chart shows information about fiction book sales from 2006 to 2010

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