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The number of mobile phone sold

The number of mobile phone sold ABL3x

This table illustrates the sells of cellphones between2006 and 2012. There are five companies which we can see how many of their products had been sold in six years. Surprisingly, despite the apple firm data has shown since 2007, it demonstrated a continuous increase from 2. 3 million to 136. 8 million in five years. Additionally, Samsung sold in a gradual rise and take first place in 2012 by selling 396. 5 million mobile phones. Despite a fluctuated trend in the Nokia business, the company sold the most except for the year 2012. However, the Motorola firm progressively decreased in the sales number over time and had the lowest number of sold objects in 2012 the same as the Ericsson. Ericsson had a fluctuated trend nevertheless, it sold the lowest amount all the time.

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, it sold the lowest amount all the time. 