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Abdul having hazizz namnagani

Abdul having hazizz namnagani q0335

The diagram illustrates the process involved in producing pears as canned fruits from hand picking up to when they are stored. In general, the pears processing has fourteen steps. It starts from handpicking of the fruits from market or farms, and it ends when they are dispatched to the food store for consumption Firstly, the canning process begins by handpicking of the fruits, then they are transported to washing area after which quality checking is keenly performed to identify neatly identified fruits. There after, they are stored in cold place, weighing and grading followed by peeling pears off and slicing them into pieces. Following that, canning takes place, then sealing or covering filled cann. The Cooking is then done to sterilize, neat labeling is done at this stage before storing and dispatching ready for consumerism.

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fruits
 from This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hand-pickinghandpicking
hand picking
 up to when they are stored
.

In general
, the pears processing has fourteen steps. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from handpicking of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruits
 from market or farms, and it ends when they are dispatched
 to the food store for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphconsumption.consumption!consumption?consumption:consumption,consumption;
consumption


Firstly
, the canning process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 by handpicking of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruits
, then they are transported
 to washing area after which quality checking is keenly
 performed to identify neatly
 identified You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruits
. Did you mean "thereafter" (= adverb, 'after that')?Thereafter
There after
, they are stored
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 place, weighing and grading followed by peeling pears off and slicing them into pieces.

Following that, canning takes place, then sealing or covering filled Possible spelling mistake found.canCNNcanoncanecansCain
cann
. The Cooking is then done to sterilize, neat labeling is done
 at this stage This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 storing and dispatching ready for consumerism. 