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The diagram illustrates how the ordering process is used by one company.

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The diagram illustrates how the ordering process is used by one company. Generally, it is clear that there are various steps involved, beginning with the order received and ending with the other shipped and client. The process commences when the other is received, we need another from current and we have a quality for a discount for customer and then we have the discount applied, we will other entered into the system and have other shipped and client charged. Another process, if we don’t have other from current, we will refer by current, and then we are referring client offered a discount on the next order. Following this, after referring by current, the new client is added to the customer database and then the order is entered into the system and the result is the order shipped and client charged. If the customer doesn’t have a qualifying discount, the order will be entered into the system and make an order shipped and the client charged.
The diagram illustrates how the ordering process is
used
by one
company
.
Generally
, it is
clear
that there are various steps involved, beginning with the
order
received and ending with the
other
shipped and client.

The process commences when the
other
is received
, we need another from
current and
we have a quality for a
discount
for
customer and
then we have the
discount
applied, we will
other
entered into the system and have
other
shipped and
client
charged.

Another process, if we don’t have
other
from
current
, we will refer by
current
, and then we are referring
client
offered a
discount
on the
next
order
. Following this, after referring by
current
, the new
client
is
added
to the customer database and then the
order
is entered
into the system and the result is the
order
shipped and
client
charged.

If the customer doesn’t have a qualifying
discount
, the
order
will
be entered
into the system and
make
an
order
shipped and the
client
charged.
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