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a line graph. Summarise and compare

a line graph. Summarise and compare J0lM5

According to the graphical data, we can discern that the graph shows the profit figures for three football clubs – Dandenong, Geelong, and Noble parks - over a year. Overall, it is clear that the Dandenong club is the most profitable among other ones. Its profit begins at about 45 thousand dollars and skyrocketed to about 60 thousand dollars in the first quarter. As for the Nobel Park football club’s revenue, it falls evenly throughout the year. It is also indicated that Noble Park finished the fourth quarter at just under 10 thousand dollars falling from over 50 thousand dollars. At last, the Geelong football club compares to Noble Park grows rapidly and doubles the profit by the of the period. Making a comparison of all data generally shows that Dandenong increases throughout the next few quarters. In conclusion, there were dramatic differences between the three football clubs.

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clubs
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Dandenong
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Overall
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clear
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Dandenong
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club
 is the most profitable among other ones. Its profit This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 at about 45 thousand dollars and skyrocketed to about 60 thousand dollars in the first
 quarter. As for the Nobel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
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football
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club’s
 revenue, it falls evenly
 throughout the year. It is also
 indicated that Noble You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 finished the fourth quarter at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 under 10 thousand dollars falling from over 50 thousand dollars.

At last, the Geelong You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
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club
 compares to Noble You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 grows rapidly
 and doubles the profit by the of the period. Making a comparison of all data generally
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shows
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Dandenong
 increases throughout the next
 few quarters.

In conclusion
, there were dramatic differences between the three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
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clubs
. 