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According to the graphical data, we can discern that the graph shows the profit figures for three football clubs – Dandenong, Geelong, and Noble parks - over a year. Overall, it is clear that the Dandenong club is the most profitable among other ones. Its profit begins at about 45 thousand dollars and skyrocketed to about 60 thousand dollars in the first quarter. As for the Nobel Park football club’s revenue, it falls evenly throughout the year. It is also indicated that Noble Park finished the fourth quarter at just under 10 thousand dollars falling from over 50 thousand dollars. At last, the Geelong football club compares to Noble Park grows rapidly and doubles the profit by the of the period. Making a comparison of all data generally shows that Dandenong increases throughout the next few quarters. In conclusion, there were dramatic differences between the three football clubs.
According to the graphical data, we can discern that the graph
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the profit figures for three
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clubs
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Dandenong
, Geelong, and Noble
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parks
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over a year.

Overall
, it is
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that the
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Dandenong
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is the most profitable among other ones. Its profit
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begins
at about 45 thousand dollars and skyrocketed to about 60 thousand dollars in the
first
quarter. As for the Nobel
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Park
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club’s
revenue, it falls
evenly
throughout the year. It is
also
indicated that Noble
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Park
finished the fourth quarter at
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just
under 10 thousand dollars falling from over 50 thousand dollars.

At last, the Geelong
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club
compares to Noble
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Park
grows
rapidly
and doubles the profit by the of the period. Making a comparison of all data
generally
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shows
that
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Dandenong
increases throughout the
next
few quarters.

In conclusion
, there were dramatic differences between the three
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4 paragraphs
148 words
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