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A laptop computer is a portable computer with a display screen hinged to a keyboard that is small enough to take anywhere. It's very expensive, so before I often searched for information about it, such as: model, when it was made, and especially its price that I could afford. I will purchase it directly from a company like Acer, Apple, Dell, or Microsoft. I can make some mistakes if I get it online. Moreover, I will have some favors from the store. 

A laptop computer is a portable computer with a display screen hinged to a keyboard that is small enough to take anywhere. It's very expensive, so before I often searched for information about it, such as: model, when it was made, and especially its price that I could afford. I will purchase it directly from a company like Acer, Apple, Dell, or Microsoft. I can make some mistakes if I get it online. Moreover, I will have some favors from the store. kWw0d
A laptop computer is a portable computer with a display screen hinged to a keyboard that is small enough to take anywhere. It's very expensive, so before I often searched for information about it, such as: model, when it was made, and especially its price that I could afford. I will purchase it directly from a company like Acer, Apple, Dell, or Microsoft. I can make some mistakes if I get it online. Moreover, I will have some favors from the store.
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purchase
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IELTS academic A laptop computer is a portable computer with a display screen hinged to a keyboard that is small enough to take anywhere. It's very expensive, so before I often searched for information about it, such as: model, when it was made, and especially its price that I could afford. I will purchase it directly from a company like Acer, Apple, Dell, or Microsoft. I can make some mistakes if I get it online. Moreover, I will have some favors from the store.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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